I don't know what happened to your last comment on Reapers, but I wanted to thank you for reading my story and for your comments!
Because of them I've decided to go through and edit a bit earlier than I intended and rework the first chapter, as well as take you advice into serious consideration which then turned into me doing something with that advice.
Ultimately, thanks for reading! Means a lot to me that someone has taken their time to read something of mine and overlook the errors! :)