Manga-tarian

@IceCoreTasteTheFire Look you asshole, i'm not in 5th grade you bimbo.  Also I never asked for criticism.  I asked for pointers and advice.  I never asked for a entire page telling all of my little mistakes.  I am not a person who bases everything I do on people's comments.  If someone pointed a grammatical error, then yeah I would fix it.  If someone told me a sentence or some of my book did not make sense I would fix it.  You were complaining about the characters behaviors and how the story is going to fast.  First the character known as Levi in the   real anime he does swear a lot.  He is a fucking short ass bitch who is also bad ass that could kill fucking titans!  That's how he really does act.  Now again, you were complaining how the story was going to fast?  Well if were being  honest here, I think you just read it to fast or you were to stupid to be able to grasp what was going on.  But there are other authors on wattpad who write less than 3 chapters and then say that it's finished.  Not only that, but they make it out to be where Levi and Eren automatically fall in love.  I am not rushing into anything that involves actual romance.  Yes Levi did walk in on Eren while he was taking a shower.  But nothing was mentioned about love or arousal.  I have read some of your book and I think as well as my older sister think it is good cringe material.  If that's what your going for then your on the right track.  Thank you for using me for inspiration for your status btw.  Yeah, I caught that. ;)

@IceCoreTasteTheFire it is true that I recently joined wattpad but I am I college student who is busy with work. I have a life and write stories in my free time. Plus, you asked for criticism so I don't know what the big deal is. I think you're just hating. I gave you advise. I was not bashing you. If you are too sensitive for honesty then you need to continue on your fifth grade work instead and learn how to write a good story.