Thanks I really appreciate your opinion about my book, I would love to give you tips, and I really bet your not that bad of a writer you just need some help :3 Anyways J think you should just read some books on what you want to write about and take some ideas from that, and if you have some idea just write it down and make a rough copy of what your thinking Then write it out, Also just add drama people like drama XD and add sad scenes and some happy scenes I guess, be original don't have endings that are like the other fics or stories out there make your own ending and stuff you will be amazing I know that already :3