Raival904

Hey maps. I am sorry about ATWOS compete lack of new chapters as of late but I split chapter 5 in two is it has become so long; it now has over 40,000 words. It’s been killing me and the lack of updates has also been doing me harm too.
          
          I’m offering something thigh to readers and followers.
          
          I hope you’re still interested in commenting and reading ATWOS. 
          
          Here’s the part! https://www.wattpad.com/1630203852?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Raival904

Raival904

@Maptnh Chapter 5 part 1 is released by the way! Hope to see any thoughts you got on the comment bubbles!
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Maptnh

@Raival904 it's ok you did what you did i waited long to hear you, keep up the good work.
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Raival904

Hey Map, if it’s alright with you to put this here; I updated War of Steel’s arsenal book!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1464004638?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Raival904

Maptnh

Chapter are not that long for me but it's okay I am busy with IRL things like playing video games and stuff, I run out of words to say my mind is well run-out, anyway how's the m4 rail gun tank coming along.
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Raival904

But the war won't start in that chapter, it's chapter 5. It can’t wait, nor can chapter 6. But I’m going to try to keep chapters under 25,000 words from now on, if I can
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Raival904

@Maptnh So the chapters are too long for you?
            Perhaps some things on chapter 3 aren't needed like some of the PrimeBot and Michael parts on it. I wanted to remove them so chapter 3 won’t have so much filler, I removed a bit of that, o think it needs more removed.
            
            Hope to hear any comments! I seldomly see any from you. I’d like it though. But I can’t short all the chapters all for you, I’m doing this for myself and my readers and followers like you. A good story, with a good plot line, and a good what-if in War of Steel with the Fire Nation winning instead. There’ll be new things added to chapter 4, but I won’t spoil it. lol. The clash between the UC and the PE will happen in chapter 4. So sooner!
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Raival904

Map, how are you doing? You going to start a new story?
          
          Lately I haven’t updated just yet but I’ve made progress however, I was counting how many ships the UC would have. I was thinking no more than 1,100 or so ships, at most, or at least no more than 970 or 980. I have a plot idea that I have been thinking about and planning to do.
          
          I was wondering if what you think. I already have 527 destroyers counted and added, as well as 285 escort destroyers. Both including Johnston and Samuel B. Robert’s!

Raival904

Once I count all the ships I have, if I have too many or think I do, I’m going to reduce them for story purposes and for some measure of logic (I guess lol). Then I will start determining the amount of vehicles, tanks, and aircraft in the arsenal there will be.
            
            And I know it’s taking a while. But I want to make these chapters- 3 and 4 written well and made more interesting. Writing is sometimes no cake walk.
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