MarathonEater

Good morning everyone!
          	
          	I have some good and bad news...
          	
          	Good news is that very soon I'm going to open up to you all...share my world with you in a way that not many people have ever experienced.
          	
          	Bad news is that I have to leave for some time in order to do that.
          	
          	Thank you to everyone who read and gave me feedback! I loved reading your comments and hearing about your moments. It just shows how connected we all are.
          	
          	
          	

MarathonEater

Good morning everyone!
          
          I have some good and bad news...
          
          Good news is that very soon I'm going to open up to you all...share my world with you in a way that not many people have ever experienced.
          
          Bad news is that I have to leave for some time in order to do that.
          
          Thank you to everyone who read and gave me feedback! I loved reading your comments and hearing about your moments. It just shows how connected we all are.
          
          
          

marina-vega

Hi Shai, just wanted to say thanks for voting and for all the comments , I really appreciate it! you know how it is with non fiction when its your own life, it means a little more with your writing! so I really appreciate the support. your story seems really interesting Ive been so busy lately with re organizing my own that I haven't gotten a chance to catch up on my wattpad reading but ill be sure to check yours out when I do!! good luck :)

marina-vega

Thank you, I look forward to checking out yours as well!
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MarathonEater

@marina-vega Don't worry take your time! No rush. Look forward to reading more of your work!
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afemalepoet

I love your memoir 
          It is beautiful!

afemalepoet

Awww thank you 
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MarathonEater

@AYKAM1210 Aww thank you so much! You have no idea how much that means to me. I'm enjoying your work as well! Keep them coming!
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xEmiliaForestx

I've read your book, and so far it is really relatable, legible and understandable. :)) This will do well. The only thing I suggest changing the chapter names to Chapter 1 2 3 or something which is consistent and begin with dear diary in order for the readers to understand that these are entries. Its up to you really

xEmiliaForestx

:))
            
            I did listen to it it but it might help to be more explicit and state it at the beginning of each section.
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MarathonEater

@xEmiliaForestx Thanks for reading and commenting! You're awesome!You missed the author's note it states it's a diary! 
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xEmiliaForestx

Thank you for voting on my book chapter and following me!

xEmiliaForestx

Okay, I will do
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MarathonEater

@xEmiliaForestx You're welcome! Let me know what you think about Babbles from a Child when you get the chance!
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