Raival904

Hey Marcus! Chapter 5 is progressing well but it’s taking a long time since I’m putting a lot of effort and stuff into it because there’s multiple things I wanted to lead up to the war starting. But there’s fighting even before that!
          
          What do you think of chapter 4 so far of ATWOS? I didn’t see much of any more of comments you made. There’s defiantly stuff I could improve on the chapter  and include chapter 2 (Chp 2 needs the tell-y-ness cut back)