Den_vandrande
Hi, nice work.
I'm a girl from Sweden who really likes what you are doing. I'm writing a book but i'm not good at writing.
Thank you for letting me taking your time.
Marewen
No it doesn't lack details! I think it's really good and I'm impressed because I find it harder to write in Swedish just because of the lack of emotion filled words. But that's just me. Also it's very joyful to read others than many who often try and use more details than they're actually capable of and they end up with a book where they just describe things or a book filled with beautiful words without a real meaning because they're not used correctly.
Den_vandrande
@ Den_vandrande What did you think the beginning of my book? I know that you are not that good at Swedish but do you think that I lack details.
