MarianaManami

Lovesss! There will be slow updates because I’m currently very busy :( I’m doing my best to update as much as I can so please be patient! Thank you for those who are reading my story, I appreciate it very much ^^

saradautchiha36

Dear auther, i would like to know why my story isn't getting any new readers even though i work hard on it . 
          
          Please can you check it out and tell me what's wrong with?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/330098352?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=saradautchiha36

MarianaManami

@saradautchiha36 >3 no problemm!
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saradautchiha36

@ saradautchiha36  omg!
            Thank you sooo much for answering my message and sure i will change the title cuz i believe whatever you say is the right thing
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MarianaManami

Hii! I’m not an expert in books, as this is my first time writing one, but I’ve read the first few chapters of your book and to me it seems good, a few vocab mistakes and maybe give a clear summary of what the book exactly is about. It’s all about good first impression, so the cover and description is very important. This is just my opinion, but maybe change the title into: Yuichiro/Muichiro x Reader (oc’s) - Besides each other. If you don’t want to then it’s completely fine, it’s up to you I like it in general though
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Nar1nee

HAI!!! I MADE A NEW STORY AND CHAPTER 1 IS ALREADY OUT! I WILL BE HAPPY IF YOU TAKE A LOOK AND READ IT! ♡´･ᴗ･`♡
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1380567840?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Nar1nee&wp_originator=gd59odpu1A%2FYrhhDME6cdQ7sHZKBtk%2B2N5%2Ftkg473xE8%2BV7pgoQmJdooXwHT9FjbxQeyPh9qpRrl49inQrd%2FxpSCXXXe3yGn1Acd2sCfsQosgtRCM6R8ynbAOY7QoCBm

MarianaManami

Yeah sure!
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