Marie-Rose-Alice

Hi! 
          	Thank you all for the 200 views and 75 votes on my poetry collection "Healing in Pieces".
          	Have a great day!

Noah42151

Hey! I just wanted to say, the opening and idea of your story are really attractive . The only thing I’d suggest is adding a bit more of the characters’ reactions; it would make the scenes hit even harder, will engage the readers more. Otherwise, it’s fantastic!

Marie-Rose-Alice

@ Noah42151 I'll take note of that
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Noah42151

@Marie-Rose-Alice very well, because  the concept is good and if you will add thier reactions and space it will be easier to for the readers to comment and curiosity.
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Marie-Rose-Alice

@ Noah42151  Yes, I know, but it’s been a long time since I last wrote a real book, since I’ve only been writing poems for the past two years…
            But thanks for the comment, I’ll try to add more detail in the next chapters!
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noxiantale__55

I will read and comment with my second account because I don't want to mix up as reader and write, I hope it fine with you

Marie-Rose-Alice

@ noxiantale__55  I don’t mind at all ! Do whatever feels best to you.
            And I added your book to my reading list, because with school and work, this sh*t takes up so much time and i’ll probably forget about it.
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Noah42151

@noxiantale__55 this is the one I will use
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