MarieGold1998

Hey..... Kfb

@MakindePurple youre welcome dear. Anytime

@MakindePurple and i think the girl's reaction is a little off. Its a tad unrealistic

@MakindePurple just try to explain the story and their powers without revealing too much. You have a lot of time to reveal backstory. Dont do it at one point

@MakindePurple the beginning. 

@MakindePurple i honestly didnt get the start of the story

@MakindePurple and try not to write too complex

@MakindePurple i think you should work on your dialogue and punctuation marks

@MakindePurple not on phone

@MakindePurple i only know how to do it on my laptop