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Wattpad Rewiews Part 5
          	Cozy Winter Book Contest 2025 #CWBC25
          	by DreamWeaverzz
          	
          	''External appearance 5/5''
          	"Summary 3/3"
          	''The correlation with the category declared 2/2''
          	''Correct use of language 27.5/30''
          	''Editor 9/10''
          	''Spelling 9/10''
          	''Punctuation Points 9.5/10''
          	''Plot 36/40''
          	"Story flow/pace 9/10"
          	''Dealing with surprises and setbacks 9/10''
          	"Originality 10/10"
          	''The Character Development 8/10''
          	''Emotions it evokes 13/15''
          	''Social issues it raises 8/10''
          	
          	TOTAL: 89.5/100
          	The story is very nice, it has action, humor, moments of joy, sadness. It is a beautiful and quite original work. Although I have not read many fantasy books, it is certainly not something ordinary. All the characters are beautifully created, each with their own character and personality, where they formed a strong team. The whole world that the author has created is very beautiful. She has created a pretty interesting world, as well as incorporating the modern world. The descriptions were nice, with the vocabulary being used quite nicely and creatively.
          	It is a fairly "well-maintained" piece of writing without many errors, there were few in the way of spelling. The author has used very nice vocabulary and it seems familiar, however, many times the dialogues are more flat? (I can't think of a word, but I don't mean it in a bad way).
          	It makes sense for the narrative to have a nicer and more formal vocabulary and for the dialogues to be simpler since they're talking to each other. Simply because the narrative is first-person, that is, the thoughts of the protagonist, it hits a little.
          	The flow of the story is quite good, it makes you want to read further and keeps you interested, and the ending leaves you at a critical point.

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Wattpad Rewiews Part 5
          Cozy Winter Book Contest 2025 #CWBC25
          by DreamWeaverzz
          
          ''External appearance 5/5''
          "Summary 3/3"
          ''The correlation with the category declared 2/2''
          ''Correct use of language 27.5/30''
          ''Editor 9/10''
          ''Spelling 9/10''
          ''Punctuation Points 9.5/10''
          ''Plot 36/40''
          "Story flow/pace 9/10"
          ''Dealing with surprises and setbacks 9/10''
          "Originality 10/10"
          ''The Character Development 8/10''
          ''Emotions it evokes 13/15''
          ''Social issues it raises 8/10''
          
          TOTAL: 89.5/100
          The story is very nice, it has action, humor, moments of joy, sadness. It is a beautiful and quite original work. Although I have not read many fantasy books, it is certainly not something ordinary. All the characters are beautifully created, each with their own character and personality, where they formed a strong team. The whole world that the author has created is very beautiful. She has created a pretty interesting world, as well as incorporating the modern world. The descriptions were nice, with the vocabulary being used quite nicely and creatively.
          It is a fairly "well-maintained" piece of writing without many errors, there were few in the way of spelling. The author has used very nice vocabulary and it seems familiar, however, many times the dialogues are more flat? (I can't think of a word, but I don't mean it in a bad way).
          It makes sense for the narrative to have a nicer and more formal vocabulary and for the dialogues to be simpler since they're talking to each other. Simply because the narrative is first-person, that is, the thoughts of the protagonist, it hits a little.
          The flow of the story is quite good, it makes you want to read further and keeps you interested, and the ending leaves you at a critical point.

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Wattpad Reviews Part 4
          Summer Watermelon Book Contest #SWBC2026
          by Lit Devil1961
          
          COMPOSITION 94/100
          - Structure 27/30
          The overall structure is very good and the story is easy to follow. In the early chapters there are some points where a lot of information is packed into the same paragraph, especially when the world and cities are introduced. However, in the later chapters this improves a lot and the paragraphs are better separated.
          It is very important that the chapters that present the past of Queen Hellada are distinguished by a different sign from those that follow the perspective of Elli. This makes it clear that the narrative is transferred to a different time period and passes to the perspective of Queen Hellada. This significantly helps the reader understand which time period and which perspective they are following, without creating confusion.
          - Spelling 29/30 & Punctuation 13/15
          The spelling of the book is at a very good level and there are generally not many mistakes. Most words are spelled correctly and it seems that there is attention to this part.
          The punctuation is generally understandable, but there are places where more or fewer commas and better breaking of long sentences are needed. The dialogues also need a little more attention to punctuation, so that they read more naturally.

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GENERAL PICTURE 20/20
            - Color - Reading experience 10/10
            The book has its own color and identity, which is mainly evident in the unique world that has been created. The different groups, characters and their relationships make the story not limited to just a simple adventure, but creates an entire world that the reader wants to explore.
            The reading experience is made even more interesting by Elli's attempt to understand what is happening with her dreams and by the mystery surrounding Queen Helada. The alternation between Elli's present and Helada's past adds another layer to the story and makes the reader want to put the pieces together.
            
            -Emotions it evokes 5/5
            The book manages to evoke many different emotions. There is curiosity, especially around Elli's dreams, Hellada, and the secrets of the past. There is anxiety and fear when Miedo appears and the group finds themselves faced with danger.
            At the same time, the relationships between the characters add friendship, tenderness, humor, and romance. Thus, the story is not based on a single emotion. The reader can feel anxiety about what will happen, curiosity about the revelations, but also become emotionally attached to the characters.
            
            - Creativity 5/5
            Creativity is one of the book's greatest strengths.
            A unique world has been created with different groups and characters, while the story combines fantasy, mystery, adventure, relationships and twists.
            Particularly interesting is Elli's connection to the dead Queen Helada through dreams. The fact that Helada's story is presented through separate chapters and her own perspective makes the past function like a piece of the puzzle that must be solved.
            Also, Brillar, who initially seems like just a light guiding Elli but later turns out to be hiding something much bigger, is a very powerful idea and could lead to one of the most important twists in the story.
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SECONDARY CHARACTERS
            The secondary characters are supporting characters in the main story, but they complement the story perfectly. Sylvia, who comes from the Rubicundos, shows that the group is not only made up of people on the same side. Tom and Dylan, who belong to Adrian's group, initially help to introduce his own group and then participate in the group's joint search. Dylan gains additional interest through his mutual love interest with Caroline. Dora, who appears later in the group and seems to create a possible love connection with Daniel, thus giving him a more personal story. Finally, Alexander is connected to Queen Hellada's past, as he was her guard, which makes him important for the revelation of her story. At the same time, his development as the Queen's love interest adds another emotional element to the plot.
            
            - Originality 20/20
            The story is highly original, mainly thanks to the world the author has created on the planet Universo. It is a complete world with different groups, identities and relationships between them. Of particular interest are the four different groups of Universo: the Grisaceos, the Luminosos, the Oscuros and the Rubicundos.
            The existence of these groups creates different sides within the same world. The reader not only gets to know different characters, but gradually learns that each one may have a different origin, perception, powers and position within the world of Universo.
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ADRIAN: Adrian is one of the most interesting characters in the group. At first, he may seem like a character who shouldn't be trusted easily. However, as the story progresses, he proves to be a great help to the team. At the same time, Adrian is interested in Elli and tries to claim her. This creates his personal conflict with Shawn.
            
            BRILLAR: Brillar is a more mysterious character. She doesn't belong to the group in the same way that the others do. Her role is mainly to guide Elli. However, at the end there is a big twist, about what her real role is.
            
            MIEDO: Miedo functions as the great dark force of the story. His presence is not just another character who stands in opposition to the group. He is the threat that forces them to face fear and danger. The idea that it is a dark shadow creates an atmosphere of mystery.
            
            HELADA: Helada is a special case, because she is already dead. She is not a character who is alive in the present. However, her presence continues to influence the story. Elli sees her in her dreams, which creates a great mystery. The chapters that present Helladas' past are very important, because they allow the reader to get to know the queen through her own perspective.
            
            NYMPHADORA: Nymphadora is important because she was a confidant of Queen Hellada. Her role becomes particularly important when Elli arrives in the kingdom. Through her, the group is able to learn about Helada's past and see her memories. This essentially makes her a link between the living and the history of the dead queen.
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Wattpad Reviews Part 3
          The Wattpad Script 2026 #TWS26
          by tsolakidisnikos92gma
          
          AI book rating: #118
          Plot: 8/10
          Interesting: 9/10
          Style: 8/10
          Spelling: 9/10
          Commentary Ai: excellent start and strong atmosphere. The nostalgia for the lost winter immediately piqued the interest, very careful writing!

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 #118 Plot (9/10). Interestingness (10/10). Style (8/10). Spelling (8/10).
            The only thing that bothered me was that the paragraphs are huge and make the text unreadable. Nevertheless, it's a very good effort and quite an original idea -
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Announcement of the 5th finalist...
            5) #118 Marielladrag (Universo: Η αναζήτηση του χειμώνα) Points: 123
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Wattpad Reviews Part 2
          Summer Coctail Book Contest #SCBC25
          by DreamWeaverzz
          
          The cover and the few views made me biased at first. But, indeed, I shouldn't judge a book by its cover. It certainly gives the fairy tale atmosphere that the author obviously wants and it's a shame not to read such a story. 
          The title seemed a little childish to me, but when I read it, it resonated perfectly.
          Also, I may not be very familiar with the genre of teen fantasy, but I think it would probably fit better in the fantasy/mystery category, since the characters are young adults... but I might be missing the point..., also the sense of mystery is pervasive from the summary even... Otherwise, it draws you in from the first moment and the more the chapters progress, the better it gets. It's a one-swipe read and makes you eager to find out what's next.
          It has adventures and twists, beautiful descriptions and the depiction of a beautiful dangerous universe. With tremendous inventiveness in inventing monsters, creatures and names.
          The action moves quickly, with breaths of humor that keep you entertained and characters realistically written with lively dialogues. Elli, an ordinary girl, is called upon to save her world and unite the multitudes, with a destiny that brings her to the Avatar realm and its universe.
          It combines, risky but successfully, the modern world as we know it, with the mythical one. Also worthy of special mention is the very correct and targeted quotation and the music videos at the end of each chapter.
          
          I'm not impressed often but this deserves it!
          In total, I'll give it an 8.5 out of 10!
          
          External appearance: 4/5
          Summary: 3/3
          Correlation with the declared category: 1/2
          Correct use of language: 26/30
          Edited:9/10
          Spelling:9/10
          Punctuation Points:8/10
          Plot:40/40
          Story flow/pace: 10/10
          Dealing with surprises and twists: 10/10
          Originality: 10/10
          Character development:10/10
          Emotions it evokes:15/15
          Social issues it raises:8/10
          
          TOTAL: 93/100

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...And now that we've looked at the reviews in detail, let's move on to the results!
            And the positions were formed as follows:
            1st Place was won by the book Universo: The Search for Winter by Marielladrag, with 93/100...
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Wattpad Reviews Part 1
          WINTER BOOK CONTEST 2024 by DreamWeaverzz
          Universo: Η αναζήτηση του χειμώνα
          
          ''External appearance 5/5''
          
          ''Summary 3/3''
          Interesting summary! It gives the feeling of the cartoons from the ones that played on TV and we would wake up in the morning just to watch them even if it was 7 in the morning. It has such an adventure!
          
          "Correlation with the category of 2/2" Fantasy - romance
          
          "Writing 29/40''
          
          "Punctuation marks 10/10"
          
          "Structure 6/10"
          
          "Plot 27/35"
          
          ''Flow/Rhythms of history 10/13''
          
          "Dealing with surprises and twists 6/10"
          
          "Originality 11/12"
          I've never come across a book in this style before, but I'm sure there will be a type in the fantasy category, wizards, etc.
          
          "'Emotions it evokes 8/10''
          It reminded me of a book we're doing in a class. The book is "Invisible Cities" by Calvino. From what I know, they also did it in architecture in a class, it's very interesting, huge imagination, for anyone who asked about my own project, I've taken Cities and Sky 5. Page 183.
          (For this book, I definitely recommend the author to read it for inspiration)
          
          ''Social issues it raises 10/10''
          Gender racism. It has little hiccups. War. Children who seek peace.
          
          TOTAL: 79/100

statherhsunarthsh

Καλησπέρα!  Αν σου αρέσουν οι ρομαντικές ιστορίες με βασιλικά παρασκήνια, θα εκτιμούσα πολύ να ρίξεις μια ματιά στο βιβλίο μου, "Crown Wars",  το δουλεύω εδώ και καιρό και θα χαρώ πολύ να ακούσω τη γνώμη σου!

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@statherhsunarthsh Μα φυσικά! Λατρεύω τέτοιες ιστορίες! Τρέχω να την ξεκινήσω ;)
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@GeorgiasWrites2025 Αωω σε ευχαριστώ τόσο!!
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GeorgiasWrites2025

@Marielladrag Συγχαρητήρια, κορίτσι! ❤️
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tsolakidisnikos92gma

Μπορείς να μου στείλεις το instagram σου για να σου στείλω το αυτοκόλλητο για την θέση που πείρες στον διαγωνισμό 

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@tsolakidisnikos92gma Ναι φυσικά! @happilyever_after20 Σε ευχαριστώ πάρα πολύ και για τη διοργάνωση συγχαρητήρια!
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