I don't really know if anyone is actually interested in my story so I don't know if this matters or not but I will be holding off my story for a little while because I'm running out of ideas and I have another story I've been working on that I actually planned out and makes more sense.
I've been trying to change the story for a while now, seeing what I can improve and what things to change but it was too much so I decided to make a new one which I'm working on right now. I've also changed the ages since I realized it was too big of an age gap