My reader in the past: Hey who is talking and who to who, this is confusing lol, I can't follow.
*Fix that part by adding the character name besides the dialogue*
Present day reader: The script style looks jarring bla"
Me: This is why I don't listen to other and to an extend believe bookclub review is not useful.
Hey! Wanted to thank you very much for checking out God of Thieves, I really appreciate it! Hope you continue to read and check out the story, there’s plenty more cool stuff to come!