Hey, your Harry Potter fanfiction really was a good read.
I normally like Ron, Hermione, and the Order of Phoenix, and I am generally uncomfortable when any of the characters(excluding Umbridge and Peter Petrigrew) are painted to be mean.
Although your book is harsh to some characters I like, I couldn't get it out of my mind for days afterward. Also, one of the points I found memorable was Harry had a new "character", Elias. The scene where both sides are pining for Harry was imprinted very well in my mind.
Overall, thanks for offering a new perspective in reading the Harry Potter books.