KevinMcKinney

Pretty good storylines but your callsign jargon is backwards! Try "Red One...Eagle One" just like police dispatch calls out the unit needed! You clearly know whos calling who between Eagle and Red One. Small hiccup for such good stories. Sorry but military and police training just screams at me and i have to restructure the sentences. LOL

MarkECooper

@KevinMcKinney  I have pasted the final in for you.
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MarkECooper

@KevinMcKinney  Thanks for reminding me. Wattpad had the first draft material! The beta readers and editors DID catch my mistake before publishing thank God!
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MarkECooper

@KevinMcKinney  the jargon was only reversed in an early draft. Can you tell me how you came by your copy of the book please?
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