Mark Leomyr Abuan Sagun

Hello everyone!
          This is my first post.
          Enjoy!
          https://my.w.tt/v6nttPHbRV

Hello guys! I just published the first two parts of my short story Chances. Please feel free to read it. I will appreciate if you also leave comments to improve it.
          
          It is my first post. 
          Thanks.