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chocolateteapot
Hey there I've started a new story on wattpad called Tin heart, but as I'm only just starting out I am in need of major constructive critism and really love the way you are able to connect with the reqder on an emotional leverl i your work. i was therefore wondering if you could check it out and comment some much needed feedback. I would really appreciate it, but don't worry if you don't have time.