Marlene558

I finally got some rankings back! All thanks to a friendly neighborhood dragon @CrossWarrior;-)

LehgoEggos

I just finished avoiding feelings overall it was really good except for some few minor grammar errors it can be perfected. I am proud to be known as your editor and I hope I did a good job.

Marlene558

@aestheticwolfy honestly u don't know how much i appreciate what you have done for me. Thanks so very very much am really glad u like it too. Am glad and proud to have it edited by u too;-)
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LehgoEggos

I edited your fisrt chapter please tell me if I went overboard. It can be annoying when being correct you too much.
          
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Marlene558

@aestheticwolfy thanks once again. Am really glad to see the notes you made 
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Marlene558

@aestheticalstars just saw the latest corrections, am very happy with them so am gonna look into them.  As always I am very grateful :-)
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LehgoEggos

Hi, don't know if you received my personal message,  and I hate to be a bother but I'm inquring on how you want your book critiqued. I want to take your preferences into view when I read so I know what to look for. 
          
          Thank you
          - @aestheticalstars

Marlene558

@aestheticalstars thanks very much.  I really appreciate it
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LehgoEggos

@aestheticalstars okay, thank you
            I'll see what I can do. 
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Marlene558

@aestheticalstars tbh honest I'd like you to read it, note all my mistakes, wrong use of words, basically anything you find uninteresting and might not be appealing to readers
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