Hello! I hope I don't come off as discourteous or anything alone those lines, but I'm an aspiring author, and I would like to hear some critique from readers around the world (like you!) here on Wattpad. Could you please check out my book Unfortunate Girl (it's just one chapter so far) and advise me on what to do and what not to do by commenting on errors or telling me what I'm good at and stuff? Orrrr you could read it for fun, if that's too much work, haha! I am in no way promoting my book, though; I just want some good advice on how to improve since no one advises me :/ Thanks in advance if you decide to agree and have a marvelous day! No pressure :) ♤Aleena