Hey, @MarrowzoPlayz
I wanted to lyk, your story…it is bad. However that doesn’t mean it’s the worse I’ve seen.
Writing takes time, and it takes patience. It’s not easy, as a writer, I was in the same boat you where in. However, what I want you to do is practice.
Practice grammar, pronouncing words, etc. learn and build yourself from the ground up, and grow as you do.