MNSAVBSM23
Hi If time permits then please give my anuseena book Darker than Darkness a try
MNSAVBSM23
@MarthaMehra Actually jab yeh book likhi thi na toh mafia aur romance ka aisa bhoot chada tha plus English bhi sudharni thi so English mein likh di
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MarthaMehra
@MNSAVBSM23 dear ji actually sach bolun toh Maine aapki iss book ko try Dene ki Sochi thi even koshish bhi ki thi but pta nahi kyo mujh se padhi hi nahi gyi ye story.. shayad isliye ki isko aapne ek professional prospective se likha hain ya fir isme vo wala Indian touch nahi hain jo normally mujhe FF story ki taraf attract karta hain.. ja fir meri English itni hi-fi nahi hain isliye Mai isko uss tarike se padh nahi pai.. I don't the reason but mujhe iss story ke saath vo wala connection feel nahi hua isliye Maine isko continue nahi kiya Mai aapki story ko kuch nahi bol Rahi aapne story kaafi achhi likhi hain maine iski thodi si discription aur thoda sa first chapter padh kar dekha tha story kaafi achhi thi but fir bhi mujhe personally aapki dusri stories iss wali se jyada pasand aayi.. even maine toh un sabhi ko do teen din mein hi pura pura padh liya tha bas iss wali ko nahi padh payi.. uske liye really very sorry
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