Hey I’ve read some of your chapters, and I have to say — I enjoyed them. You’ve got a lot of creativity and passion in your writing, and that’s the most important part.
I do have a bit of constructive advice for you, but please know this isn’t meant to discourage you from writing or finishing your story. It’s just something that might help you grow as a writer.
Right now, most of what I read is in script format — short, rapid lines of dialogue with some description in between. That style is great for speed and pacing, but it can sometimes limit how much detail and atmosphere you can give your readers. I started out writing in script format too, but over time I transitioned into story format, which allowed me to expand descriptions, bring scenes to life, and help readers connect more deeply with the world and characters.
Another thing to consider is chapter length. Longer chapters can keep readers engaged for longer stretches, even if it means publishing fewer of them. That doesn’t mean you have to force it — but sometimes giving a scene a little more breathing room can make a big difference in how it feels.
You have a great spirit for writing, and you can do this. Remember — this is your story, and you have the freedom to write it however you want. My suggestions are just tools for you to try if you want to, not rules you have to follow. The most important thing is that you enjoy the process.
