Originally I was going to have Mimosa be Y/n's aunt but it wasn't going to work because she needed to be old enough to pretend that she's her mother, so I picked Mereoleona because she's older. I made up Y/n's mother's name, idk if you mistaked the made-up name with Mimosas or if I had an error. I also didn't like the way I put Mereoleonas character in this part ethier, but i have an idea for an explanation later on yk. Also, the way I decided to make Langris's character in this is going to be a bit exaggerated negatively until I get to when he has his character development. I low-key just self projected my experience with people on to this because im writing this story because I love to write, and most of what I write has details of my life in it, lol.
Also I have the next few chapters main plot written I just need to review it a few more times for grammar, mistakes, and anything I change my mind about but the next few chapters are going to be a bit sad and what not but I love character development in books/shows so I wanted to give Y/n a big character development if that makes sense.
Also not everything's going to be spot on with the characters but I'm going to try and keep it somewhat close.
I do appreciate your honest opinion, thank you.
