Hey,
I just read your story, and.... I LOVE IT!!! It was very moving, I *sniff* nearly cried...
Have you ever seen 'Its a Beautiful Life'? Its a great movie and CLEAN! Thank heavens.... But anyway, its about a man much like Benjamin who sacrifices everything for his family -- even though they are confined in a concentration camp -- and is ultimately lost to a Nazi gun.
I especially like the part in your story when Joseph takes the high road and picks up the shovel -- perhaps because my favorite character in my story is named Joseph(!) I'm also interested in mind-set of the Nazis themselves. Did they really think that what they were doing was right? Was Hitler really a psycopath (sorry I don't know how to spell that)? I saw a documentary on that once.
Anyway, I really enjoyed your tale.
Write more! ~Michelle