@MaryamAbid0
hay hii
i first time read ur story n read all the chapter in flow.
i must say u have a very good skills of writing.
i just wanna say that its not needed that every story has a happy ending but it is defenetly need that every story has a fair ending.
firstly i m not able to judge manik character becoz can a father call his own child stupid.
SECONDLY ,in reading whole story i just concluded that may be in some way manik can be a good father for ayyan but definetly he cant be a good husband for nandini.
just for example once he himself told that he regreat every sigle time being with her n he dont want her in his life. infact he also said he loves soha.
i m just saying this becoz he never return in 2 years not for once he saw back at her n just trying to say nandini atleast deserves some one better. whole life she suffered alone but also loved him alot even when manik was not there with her n what ever he has with her.
anyways this was my point of view.
plsss continue soon .
loved to read ur story.
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