Live2sing

Hey i was hoping maybe you could take a peek at my new story called His Million Watt Smile. It's predictable and cheesy and kind of confusing but i would be forever grateful if you could take a look at it and possibly comment? Thanks so much!

Deep4141

Hi, how’s it going?  
          I uploaded Chapters 4 and 5 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favor for your works. Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  Here's the link to my story- 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/500304-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right  
          http://www.wattpad.com/500318-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right 
          

cierralight

 know these things are annoying, but could you please read my story. Only if you want to though. I don’t want to sound pushy. And if you feel like it, you could vote or comment, or even fan. And even if you don’t read it that’s ok I understand. 
          
          The Felidae Saga: The Mark Of The Tiger Book 1 
          
          SUMMARY 
          
          Raimelle Love was a kind and sweet person until her best friend dies in front of her eyes. Now she has a mark on her wrist that can’t be explained and her parents are sending her to boarding school to help her learn to forget her friend’s death. But the only thing she learns is her teacher, Mr. Stone, is not whom he seems. Raimelle soon finds herself in a dream, were she follows him into a new world. A world of Magic. Raimelle finds herself learning. Learning about her mark, about the mysterious Mr. Stone, and about what darkness lies ahead. But most importantly she learns to LOVE. But will that Love SAVE her? Or KILL her?

xiaomage94

HI...i hope that you could read my story on..." A story of twisted fate(an immortal story)the past, present and future. When dreams turn to be real" and a poem on “love and hate” and "silent love" read other poems if u have the time.
          please comment, fan and vote....your comment means a lot to me....thanks.
          PLS READ THE POEM ON” SILENT LOVE”…comment
          I had just posted new poems on ’because of you’ and ’don’t leave me’ check it out and comment..thanks