whop_5sos

Hello! I'm sorry I bother you, but I want to ask you if you could give me some advice about my small book. I've only posted two chapters and it's my first book, so I would really appreciate if you could look over it, beacuse you're one of my favorites writersand ai wanna know your opinion. Thank you anyway, kisses❤

MashtonsMoshpit

@whop_5sos Hello, lovely! I gave your book a read and it's such a cool idea! In terms of advice, I'd say to focus more on your grammar and spelling, and just keep it up! Love your enthusiasm! - Ci x
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