Masonvdberg

Thank you all so much for 50 followers in such a short time! Love you all :)

AuthorWrenKingsley

Hey! Love your story so far :) I feel bad for Jack :( poor thing. I have to hold myself back,  as I tend to automatically edit things in my head. The only thing I would suggest,  as I see you did it in ch2 and ch3, is go back to to ch1,  and separate that big paragraph. Otherwise reader's will get lost trying to find their spot. 
          
          And on to the real reason I came to leave a msg on your page,  is to thank you for the wonderful vote on chapter 3 of Destiny. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. If you have any advise or suggestions,  let me know,  as I am all ears :)

Masonvdberg

@OliviaDarlene hey thanks for the wonderful feedback and taking the time to read my book! I love destiny so far you are an amazing author! I'll let you know in the future if I have any feedback as well :)
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LarryHaveBabies

Thank you for following:) if you'd like to read, check out my books! I'm going to read your novel, it sounds interesting! :)❤☺

LarryHaveBabies

@Masonvdberg thank you love! It means a lot! And i will surely give you nice feedback.. Genuine one (: ❤❤
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Masonvdberg

@LarryHaveBabies you're very welcome! I loved letters! I can't wait to hear feedback from you on my novel! It's still in progress and I hope to get part 3 out by the end of this weekend
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jenny_the_writer

Hey thanks for the follow and welcome to wattpad:)

Masonvdberg

@jenny_the_writer you're welcome and thank you! This is such a heart warming community! I hope you get a chance to read my work in progress! I am by no means a novelist but I just love to write so I gave this a shot :)
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AuthorWrenKingsley

Hi! Thanks for the follow :) it is much appreciated. Welcome to Wattpad. I hope you find it pleasant and wonderful books to read :)
          
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Masonvdberg

@OliviaDarlene Means a lot! I'm reading your novel destiny and love it so far!
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AuthorWrenKingsley

@Masonvdberg I will add it to my reading list :)
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Masonvdberg

@OliviaDarlene Thanks I love it so far! You are very welcome for the follow and I hope you have a chance to take a look at the novel I'm creating!
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