Masonvdberg

Hey! Love your story so far :) I feel bad for Jack :( poor thing. I have to hold myself back,  as I tend to automatically edit things in my head. The only thing I would suggest,  as I see you did it in ch2 and ch3, is go back to to ch1,  and separate that big paragraph. Otherwise reader's will get lost trying to find their spot. 
          
          And on to the real reason I came to leave a msg on your page,  is to thank you for the wonderful vote on chapter 3 of Destiny. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. If you have any advise or suggestions,  let me know,  as I am all ears :)

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