MasterDokkaebi

Damn. Exams are coming and I have to study harder than six tractors working on a daily basis XD 

MasterDokkaebi

A child was sitting on a hill
          Bare in body, pure belief
          The world around was light, light
          Sun was tearing through the night
          forest on the left, green 
          Mountains on the right of him
          River flowing through the hills 
          Wide, wide, the world in peace
          houses, hanging from the trees
          Above the pacing water lead
          Smiling, shining, pure inside
          Saw the night to lighten up 
          Felt a little poke inside
          Sensed a sadness sense outside
          His eyes, opened in piercing fright
          Looked back, down the river side
          Saw a boy, wounded and torn
          Walking slowly to their roam
          Tears in eyes and clothes were bleak
          As he dropped, struggled to breathe
          The child, fast as wind and wing
          Ran the hill, down to that being
          Reached him, touched his head, so calm
          "who are you?" asked him like a charm
          -"help me. Please." right as he cried
          Tears burst out of little eyes
          "They torn me, wound me, torn my clothes
          Please, I want to go back home..."
          The child smiled and calmly said:
          "welcome home." and kissed his head

MasterDokkaebi

So... Hi there fella. I myself am a young storywriter. While I'm talented in expressing feelings and actions (hopefully), I'm not so good at story writing. Recently I found THE perfect story for me to write so I'd like to share it with you. It was made in a visual novel called "rain" by moonshen in DeviantArt and I'm very grateful of that. I'd like to start writing now though. Hopefully someone sees this when I'm bigger.