Hey matt i just read your story :D :D it's actually really good and well thought out. I like the use of semantics and syntax ;) ;) XD you've written it with great professionalism and creativity and I really enjoyed reading it :D :D :D One thing to check on; some worlds are spelt incorrectly and some of it doesn't always make sense. I also got confused with the main characters name is it James or John???? lol but other than that it's really awesome and well done. you better take the compliment cos it's the only one your gonna get whore ;) :D :D
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Welcome to watty :D *waves* hi hope you like it here
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....well that came out sounding lame as hell.....xD welcome to wattpad
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