Matchow

Chapter 4, is up for all those interested. Sorry it took a while, been trying to find the time to write. Expect more!

Liamjkp

Hey matt i just read your story :D :D it's actually really good and well thought out. I like the use of semantics and syntax ;) ;) XD you've written it with great professionalism and creativity and I really enjoyed reading it :D :D :D One thing to check on; some worlds are spelt incorrectly and some of it doesn't always make sense. I also got confused with the main characters name is it James or John???? lol but other than that it's really awesome and well done. you better take the compliment cos it's the only one your gonna get whore ;) :D :D