I really like ur way of narration! Your poems are nice too. But if u are experiencing writer's block then whatever u do. Don't ever force urself to write. Even if takes days, weeks, months, years. Just wait for inspiration and believe me when the Time is right it will hit you smack in the head. I also experienced writer's block for 2 1/2 months because of my third chapter "A Magical Encounter". So don't think ur ever alone or feel useless for not updating and what not. As for the errors there are none, so be happy! Ps. I totally Loved Your Story abt the Greek gods! Keep on writing!✌