@Mathias_Y
The release of new chapters of "Black Sapphire" has been temporarily suspended to edit the existing chapters. The goal is to revise the plot, remove certain scenes, and introduce new ones. A complete rewrite of the novel is not planned; this is a strengthening of its foundation. This process will take place over the course of a month. Similar work will also be conducted on "Green Wizard," though on a smaller scale, and new stories will be released this summer."
Haiii I want to ask can you give me a review on what do you think about my story, since I'm still kinda new, I just thought maybe I need some improvement on making a story
@suzukitokya1234 ah... I see thanks for your insight, I think I can see my down side now more clearly
@suzukitokya1234 I read your story. On the positive side, you're good at describing locations. On the negative side, the context is completely unclear; it feels like I've just started reading the second book in a series. For three chapters, it's unclear what the main character's name is, what game she's in, or how aware she is of what's happening. It's a strange situation where the heroine understands and reacts to events, while I simply couldn't grasp the essence of what's happening. So far, it's a strange story with a description of the world and action without a clear plot or characters. Despite what I've written, you probably have a chance of reaching the target audience of fans of litrpg, isekai, and similar genres (it's worth noting that I'm only superficially familiar with them). I can't give advice as I don't consider myself competent enough. Just keep writing as you like, and then, with time, you'll understand what and where you can improve.
@suzukitokya1234 that's okay I just need someone point of view about my writing story skill
