MatildeCabrita

Chapter 3
          	
          	…
          	"Yes Topping, what did you want?"
          	"McGee, I introduce you to Jacob Frye."
          	"Jacob Frye?! It's a pleasure to meet you, we were all impressed with you when you fought here in the arena." McGee says, reaching out to shake Jacob's hand.
          	
          	…
          	"Sure, of course not." Jacob said ironically. "To get to the point, is our creed familiar to you?"
          	"Creed?"
          	"Let me see." Thinks. "Do you recognize this?" Jacob releases his blade.
          	"A blade?" whispers. "" You are an assassin! ""
          	
          	…
          	"What happened?"
          	"Don't know." Byron laughs. "The princess has a desire for fighting and she couldn't resist." his glass has just been served. "Thank you Alice, my love." Byron kisses the maid.
          	"But she can be hurt!" yells Jacob.
          	"Look, I don't think so." swallows a bit. Looks at McGee. "Hello Gollumpus, so are you our new friend?"
          	
          	- Assassins Creed Syndicate: Erased Memories 

MatildeCabrita

Chapter 3
          
          …
          "Yes Topping, what did you want?"
          "McGee, I introduce you to Jacob Frye."
          "Jacob Frye?! It's a pleasure to meet you, we were all impressed with you when you fought here in the arena." McGee says, reaching out to shake Jacob's hand.
          
          …
          "Sure, of course not." Jacob said ironically. "To get to the point, is our creed familiar to you?"
          "Creed?"
          "Let me see." Thinks. "Do you recognize this?" Jacob releases his blade.
          "A blade?" whispers. "" You are an assassin! ""
          
          …
          "What happened?"
          "Don't know." Byron laughs. "The princess has a desire for fighting and she couldn't resist." his glass has just been served. "Thank you Alice, my love." Byron kisses the maid.
          "But she can be hurt!" yells Jacob.
          "Look, I don't think so." swallows a bit. Looks at McGee. "Hello Gollumpus, so are you our new friend?"
          
          - Assassins Creed Syndicate: Erased Memories 

NorahLyn0

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MatildeCabrita

@NorahLyn0 Oh! Thank u so much! I really appreciate your message! Hope you can also read my story and enjoy it, and as such I will be thrilled to recieve any feedback on writing improvment as well (I'm not british or from the US so any help is a good giving to me) Thank u once more! 
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MatildeCabrita

Chapter 2
          
          "Juliet!" The girl responds to the scream as soon as she hears it. "Can you get down here? I have someone here that I want to introduce you to!"
          ...
          "Juliet, this is Jacob Frye. He and his sister defeated Starrick and ended his kingdom."
          "It is a pleasure to meet you Mr. Frye, we are all grateful to you." The girl looks at Jacob with a certain fascination, admired his work and hoped to become as good as her future mentor.
          ...
          There was something about him because Jacob felt he wanted to recruit him too, that's when he realized, the boy reminded him of him. He tried to recall his name, "Byron, isn't he?" Jacob remembered:
          "Byron!" The boy looks. Ronald turns his attention to Jacob and Juliet is astonished at the action of his now master assassin:
          Juliet, stunned, whispered, "Byron?"
          ...
          "You called me?" Said the boy, smiling broadly from end to end.
          "Yes, your name is really Byron right?"
          "Daniel Byron Parkins at your service Sir Jacob Frye."
          
          - Assassin's Creed Syndicate: Erased Memories

MatildeCabrita

Chapter 1.
          (...)
          "Crawford Starrick! The big businessman, dead?!" Shouted a child under a porch holding out a sign. A hand takes a newspaper adding.
          "I'll take one! Here you are, keep the change!"
          "Thank you, sir."
          The former hand now gains a body; the newspaper covers the face but the top hat facilitated its identity.
          "Crawford Starrick! Owner of major industries Starrick was found dead last Sunday, December 29, next to Buckingham Palace. Although the causes are unknown, it is thought that it was the work of a secret order of homicidal mercenaries who, together with Starrick, claimed the lives of all his collaborators. " Ah! Secret order huh?"
          "Crawford Starrick had never been more famous in his life" 'replied the assassin's twin sister, looking at the free city around her.
           (...)
          
          - Assassins Creed Syndicate: Erased Memories