MattMacBride

Hey all. I had some discussion with Wattpad HQ last year about adding a category for screenplays. My suggestion was to publish a pitch with a link to the full script. They said they'd look into it, but  they seem to have lost interest. So! I decided to go it alone and publish an example  for feedback. I don't want feedback on the screenplay, only the idea and the 'presentation'. You can find it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/388884130

AbiBee

@MattMacBride Hi Matt. What a cool idea. I think your approach works. There are slightly different aspects of the overall story revealed in the YT pitch and the full synopsis, which makes it a rich presentation. The story idea has been captured and made captivating in the small space you've allowed yourself. I'd say it's about right. 
          	  The story idea itself sounds both lovely and very poignant. I don't know anything about screenwriting or filmmaking, but I can see it working beautifully. x
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MattMacBride

Hey all. I had some discussion with Wattpad HQ last year about adding a category for screenplays. My suggestion was to publish a pitch with a link to the full script. They said they'd look into it, but  they seem to have lost interest. So! I decided to go it alone and publish an example  for feedback. I don't want feedback on the screenplay, only the idea and the 'presentation'. You can find it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/388884130

AbiBee

@MattMacBride Hi Matt. What a cool idea. I think your approach works. There are slightly different aspects of the overall story revealed in the YT pitch and the full synopsis, which makes it a rich presentation. The story idea has been captured and made captivating in the small space you've allowed yourself. I'd say it's about right. 
            The story idea itself sounds both lovely and very poignant. I don't know anything about screenwriting or filmmaking, but I can see it working beautifully. x
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CLEARLY_DRUNK

Do you want to write a review for each other?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/353481303?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=CLEARLY_DRUNK&wp_originator=NOijQIAwRKxqyWWTAoTA%2BgztMJ2V6EaBp1wRGfsAMezx76fdXRXcDsbYzYqVjT2RyV06XPZsP9dqg7os4%2BKM%2BrA2mFru60Sfr1%2BDVWnU868dauO6UEA7qbga327ENZUA

CLEARLY_DRUNK

@ MattMacBride  ok then
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MattMacBride

@CLEARLY_DRUNK . Thanks, but no. I'm busy preparing for NaNoWriMo on the Bootcamp Mentors Discord server and don't have much spare time. Best regards,
            Matt.
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