Hello and Greetings. I have been reading through your work and I must say that I like how you have been setting up everything from the plot to the characters all the way to world-building. I must say that you've been covering a topic in Anthro vs Human Stories which rarely anyone seems yo touch on. I am also working on another story somewhat similar to yours but with an inter-dimensional twist as well, and I would love to hear some tips and criticism from you. Feel free to respond to me whenever you have time. Take care!