Maverick428

@Nightninja214 you're welcome

@Maverick428  got it thx for the feedback, to be honest I find it hard to visualize a fight scene and then interpret into somthing my readers would find intriguing and cool but I'm going to try my best.

@Nightninja214 I just read the Spiderman one and I just want to say that the grammar and spelling is very good, but for the plot, try to take it slowly first, introduce the character like what's going on with their daily life what part time jobs they have (if they have one of course) and try to lessen the amount of pictures and videos because it would be better if you explain everything by word but if think you can't explain some things well use pictures only videos are sometimes a no-no and that's all I can right now