eightyone81
Hello,
You offered to help in my discussion thread. Unfortunately Wattpad closed it saying I need to look for someone in another thread. Are you still available? :-)
eightyone81
Wow thanks, I didn't expect that! I would still like someone to look over it and help me improve the story. Thank you for offering your help and I hope to see a story or two from you :D I followed!
Mavrio
Okay I think your story is good so far. Me personally I don't think there is anything to edit.
I'll give you a 10/10 because the layout and great punctuation and everything else was good. Keep on doing what you do. :D