MaxMHope

My god.... I've been writing Tellina's weapon as 'battle axe' for past few months when its actually 'great axe'.... I'll edit them soon

Reign15x

I mean all a great axe is, is a large variant of a battle axe. Meanin not much changes other than the fact that it could be seen as a bigger axe.
          	  But I could be wrong, I’m not much of an axe-pert.
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MaxMHope

My god.... I've been writing Tellina's weapon as 'battle axe' for past few months when its actually 'great axe'.... I'll edit them soon

Reign15x

I mean all a great axe is, is a large variant of a battle axe. Meanin not much changes other than the fact that it could be seen as a bigger axe.
            But I could be wrong, I’m not much of an axe-pert.
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MaxMHope

Sometimes things on paper don't work. 
          
          That's why I'm gonna unpublish some chapters, add and rewrite some paragraphs, and reupload them again.
          
          Oh, and I'm going to make Marty's female character into a different character. I first thought that by showing him making his character into something really different, I thought that it'd show that he is starting to disconnect from reality. 
          
          But it didn't feel natural.

MaxMHope

After reading chapter 7 over and over, I finally realized what the problem is. The chapter has about two chapters worth of content inside it, making it feel as if the plot is whizzing through hyperspace. 
          
          So, I decided to unpublish it, move the second half to the next chapter, and fill in the gap with more character buildup and such.
          
          I'm really sorry about this inconvenience and it won't happen again.

MagBeLLeZikic

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SpencerPark1

Do you know when you plan on releasing the next chapter

MaxMHope

@SpencerPark1 Well that's a secret ;)
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SpencerPark1

@SpencerPark1 oh crap same here (so uh do you live in the USA
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MaxMHope

@SpencerPark1 Yep. So I'm staying inside my home 24/7.
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