Jun_Prelhe

Hey there! I'm also a new writer in English..
          I usually write stories in my native language so shifting to English is really challenging. My brain keeps on  beeping..
          
          "Grammar is everything"
          
          Hahaha.. anyways.. your story is really neat and nice to read! I'm not really good at reviewing/critique stories so my comments are just simple and basic..
          
          Have a good day ^-^V
          Have a good day!

MayaKC7

Thank you so much! I really appreciate feedback, any feedback really. And I wouldn't worry too much about grammar, I think as long as a story flows it doesn't matter if it's technically correct. Hope you have a good day too!
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