MayaKashyap2007

Hey so I'd really like it if you check out my new book, Mrgātrsnā. The title of the book, Mrgātrsnā, means 'thirst of a deer' because a deer in the desert runs toward shimmering heat thinking it's water and is effected severely by the mirage. This story revolves around Ashwatthama and the OC, Chandralata. 
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Khanderayani

Sweetheart, I think the next few chapters should stay light-hearted before any major emotional arc begins. Chhavi has just returned from meeting Krishna completely obsessed with the idea of her future swayamvara. Instead of talking about anything else, she keeps asking everyone what kind of princes should be invited, what decorations she wants, whether Karna will attend as a guest or competitor, whether Duryodhana will come to "win" her, etc. Everyone becomes exhausted by her endless questions.
          
          Meanwhile, Ashwathama is relieved she is safe but secretly wonders why she keeps disappearing. Duryodhana also returns after searching for her and gets annoyed that while everyone was worried, Chhavi is happily planning a swayamvara. Their reactions can be both funny and subtle enough to show that they care about her.
          
          I also think this is a good point to slowly build Duryodhana's feelings instead of making them obvious. He shouldn't be jealous because of Ashwathama alone, but because Chhavi treats everyone with the same warmth. He starts noticing that she makes people smile wherever she goes, and for the first time, he wonders why her attention matters to him.
          
          At the same time, Krishna's words should stay in the readers' minds. The swayamvara shouldn't happen anytime soon, but it becomes a promise that both the readers and Chhavi keep waiting for. It feels like a cheerful dream now, while we know destiny has much bigger plans ahead.
          This is my thoughts think about it and try to update next chapter soon dear... I'll be eagerly waiting for your next update dear... Update soon ❤️

Khanderayani

@MayaKashyap2007 I'll be eagerly waiting for your next update regularly dear... Update soon ❤️
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Khanderayani

@MayaKashyap2007 Dear, are you there? You didn't respond to my last message... And please dear update Kālabandhan next part soon dear ❤️
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Khanderayani

@MayaKashyap2007 that's okay I thought to suggest and help you like earlier you've asked me about Bhāgyalekha story... I hope my idea will be useful to you and you'll update next part soon dear... Thanks for the response dear... And please don't stop this story or delete... It's really an interesting story and I really love it... I'll be eagerly waiting for your next update dear... Update soon ❤️
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Ssgunhde

Author so sorry for being so greedy for your story as I love your story so much and I love this story even more no problem but can you update two chapters of Krishna story tomorrow as i  really wants to see their marriage and marriage life

MayaKashyap2007

@Ssgunhde I'm glad you like my stories and I'll try my best
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Khanderayani

Sweetheart please update "Kālabandhan" next update soon dear... We're eagerly waiting for your next update dear... It's been nearly  4 days since you updated the story dear... Please update next part today dear... We're eagerly waiting for your next update and please give us a response dear... Update soon ❤️

MayaKashyap2007

@Khanderayani I'll see what I'm able to do
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