@MaybeAKoala Hi, I guess it's a bit late to say this, but oh well. I think your story, An UnOrdinary Instinct, is very brilliant and well-written, and I don't think it's necessary to rewrite it from scratch, since I liked the direction you took. Even so, if you think the story needs rewriting, then go for it. It's your decision, after all. And if you think you have the potential to do even better, then let nothing stop you. (I speak Spanish and I used a translator to write all this so if you don't understand something it's because of that XD)