simonehazz
http://w.tt/1mwajLt pls check out my story. ly
McKenzie_1023
Ticci-san
Great story. I would suggest trying to not to use the word "I" for the majority of beginning your sentences. A little more adjectives and other than that you are doing great.
Skylar_Cross23
@Ticci-san I agree, but sometimes it hard to think about what else to say. like in the movies when the kid is always like " I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I " i find that very funny. lol life is great.
McKenzie_1023
@Bookworm_author_ no problen
McKenzie_1023
I need another good book.