Hey! I hope you are all doing well. Actually, I updated the first chapter of my novel "The Vow of Elladan. I felt that its writing part was weak. So with my friends' suggestions, I tried to make its writing part much more powerful. So here's the updated chapter 1! I will be doing the same for chapter 2 and chapter 3. Do give it a read and tell me your views about it! Also sorry, that your have read my novel from starting. I'm extremely sorry about that.
A big thank you to @MiniMoxx and @RowanCarver. You guys helped me alot!