MeChasingCars

@RemedyMelody Yeah sure, I'd love to!

Aly110

Hi Ashley, I normally don't have much time to read here on wattpad, but your prologue to A Millionaire's first love really grabbed my attention. It was very well written. And it was NOT missing any words... Anyway, I was wondering if you have so spare time... If you do, I'm looking for honest critic on my story. Please don't be afraid to be blunt with me. That's exactly what I'm looking for. 
          
          Here's the link to my story...
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/1609278-he-who-lives-by-the-sword-i-e-how-i-fell-for-my
          
          I hope you find time to read it. In any case, you can look it up by 'He who lives by the sword...'