angiee019_

Hey there,
          
          Have you ever read a psychological thriller that begins with an uncle who decides to he wants his nephew dead? 
          
          If that plot sounds even a little interesting, I kindly ask that you give my story ”Evaughn” a try. It features a lot of themes— romance, murder, moral conflict, and more.
          
          So far, I have 38 chapters written (almost finished), and like many of my readers, I think you’ll really enjoy the read. I also encourage feedback and tips on improvement! 
          
          Thank you in advance : )

MedievalNightmare

@angiee019_ You're welcome! Let me know if you need anything and thank you. I hope you like fantasy ;)
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angiee019_

Noted! I’ll try to make it more engaging, thanks! and sure, I’ll check out your story when I do get time
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MedievalNightmare

@angiee019_ Hi, I'm on chapter 3. It's great how you made the readers care for the character because they feel sorry for him. It is weird that the women who report child abuse are murdered, and the uncle isn't suspected, but you mentioned everything will be clear in the story. How the character is alone and doesn't want help is a great aspect here! I would work on grammar/vocabulary more to make the text more engaging.
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