AVrieling
Hi, I just wanted to say that I really enjoy reading your fanfic, even though I'm actually not really into this Genre. But I think your writing style looks more like Text messages. If you let someone who might be better with spelling and grammar than you (no offense) read over your stories and correct mistakes before publishing. That way more people would read your stories and feel more comfortable with it
vicmitch98
^^^ I know you posted these awhile ago, so I assume you’ve grown as a writer. I would go through the stories and clean up the writing and grammar. Words are missing sometimes, and there a quite a few run on sentences making the stories hard to read.
