http://www.wattpad.com/story/1291512-black-sclera
Hello friends, I have been on Wattpad for about three years now but have been "writing" for a looong long while now off and on and I absolutely love reading other people's styles and really getting a feel for that person as a writer. I think it's really cool. I'm a dark type. It's in plain sight in my writes, reads,art, and default picture. I will take any opportunity to make something just a bit off. Even if it's my own image.
It would mean the world to me for your much valued opinion in my story, "Black Sclera" I have a goal in emotions and things I want you to feel with this one, but sometimes I get so wrapped up in my own head and imagery, I lose sight of how it may seem to an outsider.
The plot and goal isn't very clear and there isn't MUCH information to go by, but I think that's important sometimes to a story rather than putting it all out there at once. Maybe to the impatient reader, this is a preferred approach, but with Black Sclera, I kinda want something a little different. It's, not very clear what's going on with my main character here, but things WILL come to light and I think it will make for a good story.
Thank you for your time, readers, I'd love to hear your opinions and thoughts and would be more than happy to give you my thoughts in return.
