MegaHurricaneGamer

It's been a while since I first released the first story! Lately I've been working on a new one and it's going to be released as a sample in chaotic writer!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1496532992-chaotic-writer-short-stories-and-poems-wings-of

Good evening 
          Thank you so much for taking time to read my story "Of My Eyes". 
          I hope you've enjoyed what you've read so far. 
          I'd love to hear your feedback, criticisms, and critique on my work. 
          I hope you take the time to read some of the other stories I've been working on. 
          
          Once again, thank you for following my work. 

Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!