Califia

Hello Megan~~Don't know if you're able to handle a bit of erotica--possibly at 16 you are--I know I was "awake" at that age.
          
          But your little story "The Twist" kinda reminds me of my tale, "A Walk in the Countryside," of course very different things happen out there to Leona. . you might say all good . . very good.
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/16999941-a-walk-in-the-countryside
          
          If you are truly a "big girl" check it out and let me know what you think.
          
          ~~Califia