Megito25

My brain rested for like an hour, and now there's a new pleasant idea brewing in my head. I should make Death a human being who doesn't know the only reason people don't drop dead around him is his twin sister who watches him from afar since they were separated from birth. Well, he's only 'part' Death and his sister hates him for it. But she has to force a reunion when she learns her brother's adoptive parents belong to a secret witch cult that plan to use him on his eighteenth birthday to bring the world to the brink of an apocalypse.
          	His sister also realizes even though she's hated him for the past eighteen years, she actually doesn't want him dead— as he should be! But not along with millions of people, right?

Megito25

My brain rested for like an hour, and now there's a new pleasant idea brewing in my head. I should make Death a human being who doesn't know the only reason people don't drop dead around him is his twin sister who watches him from afar since they were separated from birth. Well, he's only 'part' Death and his sister hates him for it. But she has to force a reunion when she learns her brother's adoptive parents belong to a secret witch cult that plan to use him on his eighteenth birthday to bring the world to the brink of an apocalypse.
          His sister also realizes even though she's hated him for the past eighteen years, she actually doesn't want him dead— as he should be! But not along with millions of people, right?

Megito25

You're only the secretary of your story cause DAMN. Why the characters gotta be so random sometimes. I can't be the only one who suffers from character insubordination.

Megito25

@TheSpoiler555 I think there's a misunderstanding here. I'm not criticising your book. I'm stating a fact (⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠). What I mean is all writers always find themselves straying from the original ideas at a point when they actually start writing. It's a hard truth that writers don't really have total control over everything their characters do or end up doing. For instance, I wanted my ML to have a love interest and I was writing and writing and twenty chapters later, he has 3 love interest. Dyg?
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TheSpoiler555

@leurayssa 
            . I'm sorry. Sometimes I just hard for me to describe. Thank you though for noting. Please keep it up. I need it. And I'll try to adjust. I'll probably re-edit again after
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